I'm writing EP fiction for fun. I actually write quite a bit. Or, more accurately, I spend a fair amount of time trying to write. This is one of the few things I've actually ever 'finished' It's a very short story and I know it's fairly rough. I've only gone back to read it once because I'm trying to get it posted before I start to hate it and chicken out. Usually I don't share but I'd like to know what you think. The reason I call it, Glory Prologue, is because I'm borrowing the plot of the Glory adventure to write a story around and this might be the prologue piece that introduces the character. Anyhow; I'd like to hear any criticism you have on form or subject or conflicts with the EP setting. A couple of notes: 1. there's quite a bit of swearing. It's just soldiers cussing and not ment to be vulgar but if the f word offends you you're not going to enjoy it. 2. This is a scene of a battle against TITAN bots in the middle days of the Fall. thank you.
Mea Culpa: My mode of speech can make others feel uninvited to argue or participate. This is the EXACT opposite of what I intend when I post.