EP Fanfic

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EP Fanfic

Hey, this is Chapter II of a little project I'm working on and if any of you have any corrections for how I've interpreted and employed the rules, please let me know so I could make changes for succeeding chapters. Chapter II itself is not as complete a thread as I want it to be but I might just end it there and progress how things have turned out in the next chapter. The Prologue and Chapter I are available on Writer's Cafe and I sorely need comments and suggestions on character creation as I've incorporated into the story there. Meanwhile, here's Chapter II:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Teh_Az/1495326/